New Deadlines
Friday (23/1/15)
Planning ready for sheets to be completed with a grade out of 20. (You may not have full audience feedback but you should have everything else covered)
Friday 30/1/15
Rough cuts ready for grading (all post production effects may not be complete but there should be an edited film that I can grade against editing pace, types of shot, variety of shots, lighting, cutting on the beat, narrative and performance)
William / Bradley/ Paolo
Research - videos and cds done - mostly in simple powerpoint format - still too text based throughout with fairly basic use of I.T - no impact section worth speaking of
storyboards are evident but no shotlists, costumes lists but no discussion of intended representations, no detail in recce reports, no lighting text or print layouts, some feedback to pitches
Matt and Callum
CDs and Video research - still too text heavy meaning you're throwing away possible marks for presentation and use of ICT
There is evidence of lyrical analysis and filmed audience response to the pitch but no clear feedback section.
Only tab completed on planning is storyboard which is the wrong way round. Can't you spin it so it's vertical?! No other audience feedback.
Zak and Harry
Still only two videos analysed
Presentation of CD analysis still weak
Zero evidence of any planning as per instructions and no audience feedback
Matt/Niall/Dan
make sure there's a clear impact section for both cd covers and video analyses
you still need to complete shotlists/recce reports/lighting needs explanation with correct key terms/ and you need layout/drafts for digipak cover and advert
Jack/William/Luca/Deji
conventions section still rather text heavy- there are a range of analyses, some very detailed and presented imaginatively with good use of I.T, some less so and marks will be allocated accordingly
check audience feedback / you need to complete recce reports (pictures), costume section would look sleaker as a slide show and you need drafts of digipak cover and advert
Gianluca/Finlegh
a range of powerpoints and prezi for I.T
check there's clear IMPACT in video section and for CD covers
- not much impact for pitch to target audience - you could at least add that they like the concept
- you could have more detail in the costume section particularly about your intended representations for a range of characters
- lighting , start by explaining your rational of why you chose low key lighting
- add layout/drafts for digipak cover and advert
Friday (23/1/15)
Planning ready for sheets to be completed with a grade out of 20. (You may not have full audience feedback but you should have everything else covered)
Friday 30/1/15
Rough cuts ready for grading (all post production effects may not be complete but there should be an edited film that I can grade against editing pace, types of shot, variety of shots, lighting, cutting on the beat, narrative and performance)
William / Bradley/ Paolo
Research - videos and cds done - mostly in simple powerpoint format - still too text based throughout with fairly basic use of I.T - no impact section worth speaking of
storyboards are evident but no shotlists, costumes lists but no discussion of intended representations, no detail in recce reports, no lighting text or print layouts, some feedback to pitches
Matt and Callum
CDs and Video research - still too text heavy meaning you're throwing away possible marks for presentation and use of ICT
There is evidence of lyrical analysis and filmed audience response to the pitch but no clear feedback section.
Only tab completed on planning is storyboard which is the wrong way round. Can't you spin it so it's vertical?! No other audience feedback.
Zak and Harry
Still only two videos analysed
Presentation of CD analysis still weak
Zero evidence of any planning as per instructions and no audience feedback
Matt/Niall/Dan
make sure there's a clear impact section for both cd covers and video analyses
you still need to complete shotlists/recce reports/lighting needs explanation with correct key terms/ and you need layout/drafts for digipak cover and advert
Jack/William/Luca/Deji
conventions section still rather text heavy- there are a range of analyses, some very detailed and presented imaginatively with good use of I.T, some less so and marks will be allocated accordingly
check audience feedback / you need to complete recce reports (pictures), costume section would look sleaker as a slide show and you need drafts of digipak cover and advert
Gianluca/Finlegh
a range of powerpoints and prezi for I.T
check there's clear IMPACT in video section and for CD covers
- not much impact for pitch to target audience - you could at least add that they like the concept
- you could have more detail in the costume section particularly about your intended representations for a range of characters
- lighting , start by explaining your rational of why you chose low key lighting
- add layout/drafts for digipak cover and advert